Tuesday, October 31, 2017

HW from Tuesday, 10/31/17

Due on Thursday, 11/2/17

1) Your October Reading Log calendar will be collected on Thursday. Have it ready to turn in when you walk into class.
 
2) Make all suggested corrections on your Favorite Season essay. Save the corrected copy as Draft 2. Print it and read it over, making sure you don't see any errors. If you find any, fix them and print it again. Then have one other person read over it and proofread it, too. Once you've fixed all errors and you're convinced your paper is perfect, print the final copy of Draft 2 and staple it to the top of the other drafts I returned to you. You will turn the entire stack in on Thursday. Have it ready to turn in at the beginning of class.

3) On the sheet entitled Copywork #6, complete the underlining activity as directed. You DO NOT need to copy the paragraph.

4) Review well for a quiz on Thursday of everything we’ve studied so far. See the link in the sidebar of the Creative Writing class page, entitled “Topics of Study, Quarter 1.” Look through and review all of your writing lessons and grammar lessons.

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Also, daily:

+ Read your (approved) book for pleasure, aiming for 30 minutes daily. Mark the number of minutes on your Reading Log as you go along—in multiples of five, rounded down—and have a parent initial it in the box each day. The October Reading Log will be due on Tuesday, 10/31/17. 

+ Make your bed! :)
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OPENING (oral presentation of Bible verse and prayer):
Please be ready to do the opening on any day!

For Th, 11/2: Robertson (CWA); Lillianna (CWB)
For Tu, 11/7: Evan (CWA); Grace (CWB)
For Th, 11/9: Maddie (CWA); Wiliam (CWB)
For Tu, 11/14: Robertson (CWA); Ivy (CWB)
For Th, 11/16: Cassie (CWA); Carissa (CWB)
Happy Thanksgiving! No KEYS on 11/21, 11/23

For Tu, 11/28: Caleb (CWA); Caitlin (CWB)
For Th, 11/30: Ashley (CWA); Luke (CWB)
For Tu, 12/5: Evan (CWA); Alexa (CWB)
For Th, 12/7: Maddie (CWA); Lillianna (CWB)
For Tu, 12/12: Robertson (CWA); Grace (CWB)
For Th, 12/14: Cassie (CWA); William (CWB)
Merry Christmas! No KEYS on 12/19, 12/21, 12/26, 12/28 


Thursday, October 26, 2017

HW from 10/26/17

1) Note that your October Reading Log will be due, signed, on Thursday, 11/2, instead of Tuesday. Get caught up on your reading this weekend if you've fallen behind.

2) If you didn't already turn it in today and you need to transfer your list of examples of figurative language in the MuMama character sketch to loose-leaf paper, be sure to make that list on loose-leaf paper and have it ready to turn in on Tuesday.

3) Make a list of as many alternate attributions ("said replacements") as you can think of. Examples include replied, answered, questioned, etc. Please type the list with one word per line and email it to me before the weekend. You will only receive full credit if your list arrives before the weekend and is alphabetized. 

4) Make all suggested corrections on your Descriptive Setting paper. Save the corrected copy as Draft 2. Print it and read it over, making sure you don't see any errors. If you find any, fix them and print it again. Then have one other person read over it and proofread it, too. Once you've fixed all errors and you're convinced your paper is perfect, print the final copy of Draft 2 and staple it to the top of the other drafts I returned to you. You will turn the entire stack in on Tuesday. Have it ready to turn in at the beginning of class.

5) Read the following entirely before writing your character sketch! (I would suggest printing a copy of this post. There's a lot of information here!)

Content Requirements:
* Your character sketch is a description of a real person you know. Do not tell a story! You are writing a description, using all the ways you've learned to enhance description in your writing.

(These seven ways to enhance description should be becoming second nature to you by now: think of your five senses... add adjectives and adverbs... use more descriptive nouns and exciting verbs... add phrases... use figurative language...)

* Your character sketch must have at least two examples of figurative language. In your first typed draft, underline and highlight your examples of figurative language, and identify whether they are simile, metaphor, and/or personification.

* Your character sketch must also have at least one correctly punctuated line of dialogue (or monologue) in it. Be creative with how you work this in. Underline and highlight the line(s) of dialogue in your first typed draft as well. It is fine if your character has a brief conversation with someone, but make sure the conversation reveals something about your character.

Procedure:

1) Complete your character sketch. Your initial draft may be typed or handwritten—it is up to you. Either way, be sure it is double-spaced so that you will have room to make corrections as you proofread.

NOTE: Your character sketch should contain at least 250 words, but no more than 500 words.

2) YOU proofread your paper first, circling any errors you find. Go back and make any corrections or changes, then type your paper according to the guidelines for typed compositions that appear on the right sidebar of this blog. Save this first draft after you've proofread it.

3) Hand a clean, printed, double-spaced copy of the paper you fixed and typed to a parent or other adult. Have them mark their suggestions for improvement directly on your typed draft, then have them sign the paper to indicate they proofread it. Save this proofread draft as well.

4) Make the corrections suggested by your proofreader if you agree with their assessment. If not, explain why you didn't use the suggestions by writing an explanation directly on the typed, proofread draft.

5) Print your beautiful, corrected draft. Staple it on top of the other two, with the very first draft you proofread on the bottom. You will turn in this entire stack of papers on Tuesday. Have it ready to turn in at the beginning of class.

Formatting Requirements

* Make sure the header is correctly formatted to automatically repeat on each page of your document. You should only need to type it once, if it is a true header. 

The header format is as follows:

Laurie Sitterding (Use your name!)
10/31/17 (This is the due date.)
Character Sketch, D1 (This is the assignment title.)
Word Count: 263 (Use your actual word count!)

* DO NOT count your words! Word (and any other word processing program) will keep track of the number for you. [If you look in the bottom left corner of your Word document, it will tell you how many words your document is. If you are using a different word processing program, search your help files for how to find this information.]

* Make sure the footer is correctly formatted to automatically number the pages, and place a page number on the bottom center of each page past the first one. (Your first page won't have a page number.)

* All other formatting requirements are listed in the right sidebar of this blog, including margins, font size, etc. See Guidelines for Typed Compositions.

If you have any questions about how to do any of these things and your family members have not been able to help you, call or text me. I am happy to help.

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Also, daily:

+ Read your (approved) book for pleasure, aiming for 30 minutes daily. Mark the number of minutes on your Reading Log as you go along—in multiples of five, rounded down—and have a parent initial it in the box each day. The October Reading Log will be due on Tuesday, 10/31/17. 

+ Make your bed! :)
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OPENING (oral presentation of Bible verse and prayer):
Please be ready to do the opening on any day!

For Tu, 10/31: Ashley (CWA); Alexa (CWB)
For Th, 11/2: Robertson (CWA); Lillianna (CWB)
For Tu, 11/7: Evan (CWA); Grace (CWB)
For Th, 11/9: Maddie (CWA); Wiliam (CWB)
For Tu, 11/14: Robertson (CWA); Ivy (CWB)
For Th, 11/16: Cassie (CWA); Carissa (CWB)
Happy Thanksgiving! No KEYS on 11/21, 11/23

For Tu, 11/28: Caleb (CWA); Caitlin (CWB)
For Th, 11/30: Ashley (CWA); Luke (CWB)
For Tu, 12/5: Evan (CWA); Alexa (CWB)
For Th, 12/7: Maddie (CWA); Lillianna (CWB)
For Tu, 12/12: Robertson (CWA); Grace (CWB)
For Th, 12/14: Cassie (CWA); William (CWB)
Merry Christmas! No KEYS on 12/19, 12/21, 12/26, 12/28 


Wednesday, October 25, 2017

HW from Tuesday, 10/24/17

Due on Thursday, 10/26/17

1) Complete Copywork #5, which has been emailed to you. Be sure the dialogue is punctuated correctly.

2) 
Reread the character sketch I wrote about my grandmother and write down every example you see of figurative language on a sheet of loose leaf paper. Identify whether each example is a metaphor, simile, or personification. Be prepared to turn this in on Thursday.

3) Choose the person you will be writing your character sketch on. Remember, this must be a real person you know or have at least met. You do not need to begin writing your character sketch at all; just choose who you will write about.

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Also, daily:

+ Read your (approved) book for pleasure, aiming for 30 minutes daily. Mark the number of minutes on your Reading Log as you go along—in multiples of five, rounded down—and have a parent initial it in the box each day. The October Reading Log will be due on Tuesday, 10/31/17. 

+ Make your bed! :)
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OPENING (oral presentation of Bible verse and prayer):
Please be ready to do the opening on any day!

For Th, 10/26: Cassie (CWA); Luke (CWB)
For Tu, 10/31: Ashley (CWA); Alexa (CWB)
For Th, 11/2: Robertson (CWA); Lillianna (CWB)
For Tu, 11/7: Evan (CWA); Grace (CWB)
For Th, 11/9: Maddie (CWA); Wiliam (CWB)
For Tu, 11/14: Robertson (CWA); Ivy (CWB)
For Th, 11/16: Cassie (CWA); Carissa (CWB)
Happy Thanksgiving! No KEYS on 11/21, 11/23

For Tu, 11/28: Caleb (CWA); Caitlin (CWB)
For Th, 11/30: Ashley (CWA); Luke (CWB)
For Tu, 12/5: Evan (CWA); Alexa (CWB)
For Th, 12/7: Maddie (CWA); Lillianna (CWB)
For Tu, 12/12: Robertson (CWA); Grace (CWB)
For Th, 12/14: Cassie (CWA); William (CWB)
Merry Christmas! No KEYS on 12/19, 12/21, 12/26, 12/28


Thursday, October 19, 2017

HW from Thursday, 10/19/17

Due ON AND BEFORE Tuesday, 10/24/17

1) Correctly punctuate the two remaining sentences (#5 and #6) from the handout we looked at together during class, entitled "Quotation Marks with Dialogue." Write the dialogues on your own sheet of paper, correctly punctuating each conversation.

2) Revisit the dialogue you composed and typed up for class today. Be sure you have everything correctly punctuated, incorporating all the rules we talked about today in class.

Guidelines:

* Your dialogue is edifying to read. 

* There are at least three characters in the dialogue, and each person speaks at least twice.

* Your narrator has some interesting intervening commentary describing the characters or the scene. 

* Your dialogue is correctly punctuated.

* Your Word document has our standard header—see sidebar for correct format—and is named “Dialogue.”

3) Email your dialogue to me as an attachment to my regular email address BEFORE THE WEEKEND. Be sure your name and the name of the assignment are on the subject line of the email.

4) Visit this blog post to read about the amazing power of the human brain to decipher and "fill in the gaps" when it is reading things that are riddled with errors. This is why it is so important to proofread things many times, and to have others look at your writing, too. Your brain can see right past the errors and read it as if there aren't any!

5) Read the following section in your Writer's Inc. book. Underline, highlight, or take notes as your read when something strikes you as important.

* "Using Strong, Colorful Words" (Pages 116-117—Read both pages entirely.)

6) If you have any writer's notebook entries to make up, please do so. You may call me for the topic(s) you missed. Set a timer and write for 5 minutes, just as we do in class.

NOTE: Do not forget to bring your writer's notebook back to class!

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Also, daily:

+ Read your (approved) book for pleasure, aiming for 30 minutes daily. Mark the number of minutes on your Reading Log as you go along—in multiples of five, rounded down—and have a parent initial it in the box each day. The October Reading Log will be due on Tuesday, 10/31/17. 

+ Make your bed! :)
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OPENING (oral presentation of Bible verse and prayer):
Please be ready to do the opening on any day!

For Tu, 10/24: Robertson (CWA); Caitlin (CWB)
For Th, 10/26: Cassie (CWA); Luke (CWB)
For Tu, 10/31: Ashley (CWA); Alexa (CWB)
For Th, 11/2: Caleb (CWA); Lillianna (CWB)
For Tu, 11/7: Evan (CWA); Grace (CWB)
For Th, 11/9: Maddie (CWA); Wiliam (CWB)
For Tu, 11/14: Robertson (CWA); Ivy (CWB)
For Th, 11/16: Cassie (CWA); Carissa (CWB)
Happy Thanksgiving! No KEYS on 11/21, 11/23

For Tu, 11/28: Caleb (CWA); Caitlin (CWB)
For Th, 11/30: Ashley (CWA); Luke (CWB)
For Tu, 12/5: Evan (CWA); Alexa (CWB)
For Th, 12/7: Maddie (CWA); Lillianna (CWB)
For Tu, 12/12: Robertson (CWA); Grace (CWB)
For Th, 12/14: Cassie (CWA); William (CWB)
Merry Christmas! No KEYS on 12/19, 12/21, 12/26, 12/28 

Wednesday, October 18, 2017

HW from Tuesday, 10/17/17

Due on Thursday, 10/19/17

1) Find an example of interesting dialogue in a book you’re reading or have read. Print a copy and prepare it “hot-dog-bun style” to turn in when you arrive to class tomorrow.

2) Type up a dialogue between three different characters. Follow the guidelines below:

* It does not have to be anything super meaningful or profund, but please make sure the conversation they’re having is edifying to read. 

* Each person should speak at least twice, and you as the narrator should have some interesting intervening commentary describing the characters or the scene. Study the dialogue from yesterday for ideas.

* Your dialogue should be correctly punctuated, as best you know how from studying the dialogue we did in class yesterday.

3) If you have any writer's notebook entries to make up, please do so. You may call me for the topic(s) you missed. Set a timer and write for 5 minutes, just as we do in class.

NOTE: Do not forget to bring your writer's notebook back to class!

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Also, daily:

+ Read your (approved) book for pleasure, aiming for 30 minutes daily. Mark the number of minutes on your Reading Log as you go along—in multiples of five, rounded down—and have a parent initial it in the box each day. The October Reading Log will be due on Tuesday, 10/31/17. 

+ Make your bed! :)
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OPENING (oral presentation of Bible verse and prayer):
Please be ready to do the opening on any day!

For Th, 10/19: Maddie (CWA); Carissa (CWB)
For Tu, 10/24: Robertson (CWA); Caitlin (CWB)
For Th, 10/26: Cassie (CWA); Luke (CWB)
For Tu, 10/31: Ashley (CWA); Alexa (CWB)
For Th, 11/2: Caleb (CWA); Lillianna (CWB)
For Tu, 11/7: Evan (CWA); Grace (CWB)
For Th, 11/9: Maddie (CWA); Wiliam (CWB)
For Tu, 11/14: Robertson (CWA); Ivy (CWB)
For Th, 11/16: Cassie (CWA); Carissa (CWB)
Happy Thanksgiving! No KEYS on 11/21, 11/23

For Tu, 11/28: Caleb (CWA); Caitlin (CWB)
For Th, 11/30: Ashley (CWA); Luke (CWB)
For Tu, 12/5: Evan (CWA); Alexa (CWB)
For Th, 12/7: Maddie (CWA); Lillianna (CWB)
For Tu, 12/12: Robertson (CWA); Grace (CWB)
For Th, 12/14: Cassie (CWA); William (CWB)
Merry Christmas! No KEYS on 12/19, 12/21, 12/26, 12/28